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"It was ok... mediocre at best. Sorry Ryan."
"Wait! I... didn't have time to plan. If I had more time? Saturday! Give me Saturday. I will pick you up at 10 AM. Ok?"
"I gave you a chance, despite all you did to me."
"I'm nervous! And a little terrified of you... Give me a real chance. I want to really try."
"If you are so afraid of me, why do you want this to work?"
"I just... I know you don't get it, Lily, but I have it bad for you. I have since you started working here. It took me forever to finally talk to you and now... I don't want to lose you. I'm terrified of not being good enough, of not meeting your standards."
Lily let out a deep sigh and wilted. "Ryan... I'm not a bad person. I know I said some mean things, but so did you and I was under a lot of stress and being held prisoner. Even if you were well meaning, I was still a prisoner and you didn't trust me to take care of myself. You don't need to be afraid of me... just be you. The you that made me watch that stupid show and had me laughing and made me feel safe. But if I say no, you have to listen. It's not ok to take what you want. Giving me an orgasm is not consent, you get that, right?"
"We were so in the moment..."
"You were in the moment. I wanted you to wear a condom but you... Anyway. I got a morning after pill and went and got tested after... what happened. I am lucky enough that everything came back clear."
"Ok, I will listen, I swear. So, Saturday?"
"Ok. Saturday. Goodnight."
Saturday, he showed up bright eyed and excited. He drove her out of the city and took her up on a hot air balloon ride where they touched down for a romantic picnic lunch before circling back. After, he took her to a fancy dinner where he had managed to get reservations, using his name she was sure. He took her back to her apartment, smiling confidently.
She looked over at him, a little sad. "Goodnight Ryan, thanks for the... nice day. When I see you at work I will say hi."
She opened the door to get out and he caught her wrist. "What? That... today wasn't good enough either?" he asked, confused. "Lily, I..."
"Let go of me Ryan," she demanded, tugging on her arm.
He let go quickly, his fingers springing open as he realized it wasn't ok to grab her that way. Not after what she had been through.
She got out and left him sitting in his car, dejected and feeling both sick and a little sour over the whole thing. How had that perfect day not been good enough?!? What did she expect?
Lily was curled up in her pajamas on Sunday evening, her laptop in her lap as she read over her emails. A knock on her door made her both annoyed and afraid at the same time. She peeked out and sighed, opening the door to tell Ryan to leave her alone.
He looked at her, a pizza in one hand as he pushed in before she could say anything. "Supreme, half without black olives," he said, setting the pizza on her coffee table. He sat on her couch and turned on her TV as she let the door close, watching him in amusement. He turned on Mystery Science Theater and looked over at her, patting the seat next to him.
She sat down, a little further down the couch as she flipped open the box. "So you managed to figure it out after all," she said, pulling out a piece.
"It took me a minute, but yeah. Also... we aren't going in to work in the morning."
"We aren't?"
"No. We have an appointment with a Ms Booker and Mr Turnboll with the FBI. We are going to put a stop to all of the shit they are doing in the company."
Lily gave him a proud smile and moved closer, giving him a one armed hug. "Thank you."
"It's going to mean our jobs and the company is going to tank big time."
"I'm good with that, I can get a job anywhere. As long as they never do it again."
Ryan gave her a sad smile. "I should have done it sooner, I was a coward. Thank you for making me see how wrong it was to let it happen. Not being part of it wasn't good enough. I hope putting a stop to it will redeem me a little in your eyes."
"We'll see," she said, her smile also sad. "May take a lot of scrambled egg breakfasts to win me over."
He grinned, his eyes shining. "I can live with that. I may even try adding to my repertoire and adding bacon or pancakes."
"As long as you don't burn my kitchen down."
He pulled her close in a hug and smiled, holding her tight against him.
- COMMENTS
Clarissa72about 3 years agoI’ve read your other stories and they were extremely good. This one isn’t bad, but it is different In such a way that I can’t quite put my finger on. I’m not sure if it’s Lily judgement and decision-making, but something is off about this particular story. However, I enjoy reading your stories so keep writing and never stop!
Allanjim3over 3 years agoHey Gabby, Gabster, Gabbidocious,
If you read your comments (and I trust you do) then you’ve come to realize by now I love your stories. That being said, I can only think you must’ve been ‘off’ when you wrote this. (Gabby, if you keep a personal journal, maybe it would be wise and hopefully educational to go back and see what was going on in your life when you wrote this). The characters are narrow, the sex is for the most part nonexistent and that which remains is blasé - and that’s NOT LIKE YOU. So in my mind, this is an anomaly. You’ve written so many fantastic stories ... and maybe this low should help serve as a reminder of the many highs you’ve given us all. And for that, we’re grateful.
: )~ Hey Gabby, Gabster, Gabbidocious,
If you read your comments (and I trust you do) then you’ve come to realize by now I love your stories. That being said, I can only think you must’ve been ‘off’ when you wrote this. (Gabby, if you keep a personal journal, maybe it would be wise and hopefully educational to go back and see what was going on in your life when you wrote this). The characters are narrow, the sex is for the most part nonexistent and that which remains is blasé - and that’s NOT LIKE YOU. So in my mind, this is an anomaly. You’ve written so many fantastic stories ... and maybe this low should help serve as a reminder of the many highs you’ve given us all.
: )~ James
bdsmbillalmost 4 years agoI generally find your stories to be very well written, and this was no exception. I know the comments have been mixed, but my opinion is what counts. I say that because I am a retired college professor with several degrees in English and writing, and a lot of books of my own published. I hope you are publishing yourself or working toward it. BTW, did you notice how humble I am?
Lovewithlacealmost 4 years agoSomething about a girl getting raped multiple times only for her “savior” to rape her is a big no-no for me, especially if she forgives him. However, though this story wasn’t my cup of tea- all of your other stories have been m favorites on the website! Though some may not like one of your stories, please never stop writing! I look Forward to your next one :)
InnocentVenusalmost 4 years agoWasn’t my favorite work of yours, but you are so talented that I read it all! I agree with the other comment that I wanted Ryan to dominate her a little and I kinda wanted to see/read about the gang bang and the other interactions with Luke (I might be messed up but I love the older man/younger girl stories) Ryan was ok until he kidnaps her and is a whiny little baby... and it was frustrating after all that that Lily was like “I’ll give you a chance” he didn’t deserve it he was such a crappy guy.. (I know the point was that she was seeing past the height thing but man he was just so needy and stalker-ish and over wasn’t a likable character.. I love you’re work!! I hope you continue to write other great stories!!!!
Ivymariealmost 4 years agoDidn't love this one. Predictable and none of the characters were likable. Would have been better if Ryan turned out to be a low-key Dom instead of an inexperienced rapey creep. It seemed like you were setting the stage for it with his threats of spanking her when she was a brat - which is something a nerdy guy who doesn't know is way around a clit would never actually do - but you didn't follow through. It was a disappointment indeed.
I would have liked to see the story taken in another, if typical, direction: shallow girl mistakes a quiet IT nerd for an incompetent loser thus avoids him. Aloof IT guy is forced into a situation where spoiled girl requires saving from corporate rape cult. The ungrateful bitch is a pain in the ass and the Dom side of IT guy comes out to put her in her place. Girl realizes she misjudged him and becomes interested and vies for his attention. He is not interested in a spoiled and shallow brat but is nonetheless stuck with her for the time being. She makes an effort to be sweet to win him over but has a difficult time not falling back into her spoiled entitled ways. He decides she might be worth his effort but only if she is willing to follow his lead and rules. He opens her eyes to the joys of submission. Followed by lots of juicy sex scenes. Rape cult continues to be a threat. Action scenes. More bdsm. Some danger and suspense. Finally, their D/s bond is strengthened when he saves her and the day once again.
Or something like that.
It's a little cliche but it at least the story makes sense and the characters have good qualities.
Qwerty678almost 4 years agoThe ending was sweet. I wasn’t expecting that. To be honest, I half expected that Ryan had used his influence with her boss to get him to dope her and he was the one raping her the entire time. I guess I’m more twisted than you. 😝 I liked this one, and your characterization was on point, but it didn’t grip me as hard as some of your others. Great story, still stellar, but I didn’t feel quite as invested or emotionally involved. Off to read it again though to see if it was just me and the breaks in reading instead of getting to finish it in one sitting like I normally do with your stories.
