All Comments on 'Limousine: The Driver'

You need an editor here and there (Literotica's got lots of them - if you ask, they'll check for typo's and howlers like his hat being "eschew" on the sofa, etc.

But the story's a good take on a classic loving wives theme and we enjoyed it.

gay guy wanting the man his wife is fucking. 1 star, this should be in the group sex category not LW.

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Does she decide she liked it - a lot - and go ahead with seeing the limo driver off and on, get curious about other studs, does she become a hot wife or...as a stand alone story - they're happy?

Clearly you are gay. Come out and come clean with your feelings. You don't want the wife to have a stranger in her ass, outs YOU who wants it in yours.

Stop the lies, stop the denial and come out.

Oh and stop writing about wimpy husbands and move your writing over to the gay section where you'll fit in better.

Good story. Steamy, compelling, and convincing. Technically, I thought the pacing and dialogue were handled well.

Just another everyday cuck and whore story, no different than a thousand others.