by xingboundaries
I lost suspension of disbelief and all interest after "Nikki was probably 5'8" and possibly tipped the 100 pound mark on her scale." As a woman who has been 5'8" since high school, there's no way Nikki could have weighed 100 lbs and been attractive or healthy looking. At 112 lbs I was repeatedly asked by classmates in gym class if I was anorexic. I wasn't. I just grew tall faster than my weight could up. Nikki would have been almost all skin and bones. So dumb. And her dimensions aren't integral to the plot. You didn't need to include them and make such a laughable error. Ugh...