by vespasion
The original message and theme has changed drastically since the first chapter. I thought the series would be about a couple who expands their sexual life by spicing things up a bit. And for the first few chapters I got exactly that and I loved it, however, it's taken on a new direction. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed this chapter and the others but I don't think that the first half (1-5) and the second half (6-10) belong in the same series. The characters feel completely different and the situations they're in are different as well. If the names of Mark and Linda ha been changed, I wouldn't have known it was them. Still 4/5
Linda is a very lucky girl. Her boyfriend released the inner slut that exists in most of us. What we want from our husband, boyfriend or mate is the recognition that we are sexual animals and the freedom to pursue our urge wherever it takes us. The end game is that our love grows stronger. I love gangbangs, hopefully that is chapter 11. xoxoxo Annette
Every woman wants her inner slut released, surrender to an desire that is animalistic and base. Enjoying pleasure from pure lust and a willingness to be guided by a strong hand or cock .
Progression through the chapters flowed. I still think chapter 01 was rushed, but all-in-all, nicely written! Very descriptive eroticism, as well.
This is a great story that is left unfinished by its author, with no submissions since 2013.