by dispatcher59
THREE of them, including this mess, currently rated below 2 stars and another three of them are rating in the low two's. A lot of horrible writing. This was an example of a story that was poorly thought out AND badly written.
1 star
A married couple exploring their sex life, although a 56 year old woman should be experiencing vaginal dryness and a thinning of the sex organs making sex a little more problematic. But otherwise, a really good story.
I mean, there are men and women who actually enjoy being abused and humiliated by their spouse, so why not simultaneous cheating? Its not cheating if your spouse knows about it, right? Like its not cheating at poker if all the players know about it, right? Just takes the people being cheated on to be brain dead. Here we have two people who lack the need and desire to be in an exclusive marriage partnership, so they fuck around and share expenses. Again, if it works for them why not? The bigger, and inevitable question is: what happens when it stops working for one of them? Age, disease, disability, or just falling for someone else, maybe younger and better looking, and who has money.
But that only happens in real life. In this world, its fuck like an animal and pretend to be human. What a beautiful fantasy. Or a grotesque nightmare.
Thanks for the effort.
People who don't like these stories should just keep moving along. Instead they stay and read, then proceed to reveal how shallow they really are. It's not for everyone, and i'm sure it wasn't meant to be. I liked many parts to it, but i wouldn't dare leave a one-word generalization, just to say anything.
Nice writing.