All Comments on 'Lindsey & Jayme'

well done for a first story

Fun story with one major plot flaw. If Lee is out of college wouldn’t he have his own place or at least an apartment with roommates? In any case, he’d have his own room. Why the hell would he spend every weekend in a frickin’ dorm? Wouldn’t Lindsey want to get away from dorm life?

Well-developed story with good flow, and it leaves lots of opportunity more more action like the threesome with both roommates.

Keep it going, and thank you.

Great story. Look forward to chapter 2 and new stories from you.

Thanks for sharing! One of the best reads I’ve come across on literotica! I look forward to more from you!

Fun and hot little story. I hope you keep writing!

Good premise.

But sooooooo rushed.

Gave up on page two.

Two stars.

OK premise.

But the line "There was no foreplay." said it all.

Hardly erotic at all.

Two stars. Being generous.