All Comments on 'Lingerie Surprise'

but failed to deliver.

Needs a good hard edit, but it also needs a lot more description. Lingerie is about the visuals. The story had little or no descriptiveness. And the fact that the boyfriend was also blindfolded seemed in contrast to that idea. We want to see the lingerie on the ladies and imagine taking it off or pulling it aside to slide our fingers, tongues and cocks inside.