All Comments on 'Lip and Annie Ch. 06'

by jake60

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Building nicely

I like the way you are slowly building the relationship between these two people. I can only imagine how Annie's life would be affected by what happened to her. The only thing missing is some background on Annie, unless I somehow missed that. It seems like she had no involvement with men before she was abducted and tortured.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
not usually into long drawn out romance..

..but I like the way you're telling this story. Great job!

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