All Comments on 'Lisa and Al Teach a Lesson'

It's a good story but it's basically the same story as you've told before. Wasting 2 pages of my reading time to tell the same story I read in "Lisa and Al". Why? You changed a couple of things, added a couple of things but it's just the same stuff. If you are going to use the same characters, tell something new with those characters. Different humiliations, different scenarios. Shouldn't be hard.

This is ONLY a girlfriend. Just throw her out. Problem solved and the rest of this pathetic story doesn't exist.

Right after Lisa was telling me again that all was 100 times more of a man then I was, with him standing back behind her laughing his ass off at me. I reached back behind my back, and pulled my gun out. Before anyone could react, I put 2 Bullets through Al's heart. As he dropped to the floor dead, I said to Lisa, he doesn't look like 100 times the man I am too me. He just looks like dead ass Corpse to me..