All Comments on 'Lisa and Jack Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loooooved it! A part from her being 19 and him on his 40s, personal taste, i dont find huge age gap really sexy.. Story was hot and juicy like fresh lemonade in the heat. Maybe a slower deeper narration in the sex scene, id have dedicated a whole session to him making love with her tits and sucking them like no tomorrow, until she orgasmed big time (because it is how it feels when you have small tits).

Tigr2Tigr29 months ago

I REALLY hope there are more parts to this story. Great beginning.

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Originally from the Midwest and has lived on both coasts for many years, but keeps coming back to his home state. An occasional author of quirky poems, rants about gold-digging lost loves or soul-mates and the occasional short story, he is also working on three novels and ca...