All Comments on 'Lisa & Paul'

by charmer949

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FailedscoutFailedscout9 months ago

I was really enjoying this story until it switched the point of view from the husband to the wife. I was very disappointed,

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I also just love to eat my wife’s cunt and it also makes me feel totally submissive to her and to that tight but fat ass..the ultimate is to kneel and have her shove it into mouth while I grip that ass and worship her..that often makes her pathetic sub husband cum..Cuckholding is probably next..I try to deny it but I know it..I’m already thinking about it and jerking..

JT

louiseacdlouiseacd9 months ago

id love to be Polly

Leroi123Leroi1239 months ago

Cuckolding is one thing, but I don't like the abusive bulls!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Yea the abusive bull stuff is just mean and not fun whereas a big cock young guy like 19? Maybe a kid with a huge cock that just loves the idea of fucking a hot wife in front of a sissy cuckold husband who does suck him somewhere in the story. But I guess the real butch here is Pauly, who needs to be fucked by the trans guy. But does he need to be bullied by a coworker? I liked his wife taking a load and swallowing but not swallowing poor little dick husband all their years. Would enjoy another chapter to read how wife gets on with the big cock as hubby watches. Good writing and well organized story, thank you

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For February 2024, I've submitted 14 short stories in 7 different categories. It's not to win a "contest." Minimalist writing reminds me of 'Penthouse Variations' & 'Nugget' erotica publications. I hope readers are enjoying them in "short bursts." Some are 3rd person, some a...