All Comments on 'Lisa's Employment Checkup'
by aspt2011
- 37 Comments
Anonymousover 12 years agoLisa spanked and butt-fucked by her male classmates, then forced to do ass-to-mouth would be a good 2nd chapter.
Anonymousover 12 years agowhat story ? even a mentally disturbed would come with something a bit more subtle.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis is definitely misclassified.
NOT exhibitionist, should be listed as NonConsent/Reluctance.
Nitro70652over 12 years agoNo pun intended. It was a good read and it seems many over react as usual. I will say that unless something is revealed in the "more to come..", maybe this should have been in the NonConsent/Reluctance category.
5 stars.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI would have to agree with the others...this should have been under non-consent/reluctance. Not saying it wasn't a good story, but I think it might have been put in the wrong place
Anonymousover 12 years agoDon't you think you went a little far with the boys from her high school being there? I hope there is no sequel to this crap.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis story was definitely mis-classified. I thought it went way too far and was unpleasant to me... but if this is your kind of thing, it was well written. Not knocking the writer, just the classification.
Diannahover 12 years agoGreat story, although it definitely needs a sequel to explain what is happening. Keep going PLEASE!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoOf all the stories I've read, this is in my top 3 for sure! VERY HOT! Yes, it belongs in non-consent, but I can see why the writer put it here. The story is about being embarrassingly exposed so the writer's focus was on how the girl felt being watched and not about rape. I think the writer made an unintentional mistake with the category.
Anonymousover 10 years agoCan't wait for the sequel, I think lisa need a good spanking in front of everyone. Gave it 5 stars you need to write more. You would be my favorite author then
Anonymousabout 10 years agoI don't know why this was so funny and arousing at the same time. Seriously, this should be a porno. It's a great script. Best thing I've ever read on here.
Rapier875almost 9 years agoGood start, good characters and descriptions.
Chapter 2 please !
Baddogdonabout 8 years agoIt is the worst story I ever read. Those people would all be arrested in the real world.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoTeenage love hole?? The fuck you're on?? The kind of language you used is a turn off, the story makes me cringe and the suspension disbelief can't stand with the poorly constructed characters, cheesy lines and blatant overuse of tropes. The idea is creepy and non-con in a way I don't appreciate, but I couldn't even finish and it was because of the way it was written, not the plot. It feels like it was written by a minor, tbh.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThis story is filled with humiliation, sex, voyeurism, and control. It deals with all things that are illegal and immoral...which is why fictional stories are fun to read.
Write on!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoLisa taken out to men in the waiting room who spank her, then back to her employers who would spank her.
The following chapter would be her classmates taking her home , the question would be her home or one of theirs.
Anonymousover 5 years agoGirls are NOT SEX TOYS RESPECT WOMANS
RAPE IS ACTUALLY A CRIME
PLEASE PUT IT ON NON CONSENT RELUCTANCE SECTION
Again saying it, RESPECT WOMANS
Anonymousover 4 years agoI expected something decent with kinks. Instead I got a story about the rape of a minor by a bunch of maniacs, who seem to be built as maniacs just so the story can happen. The story has a forced plot progression by factors which make no sense. If I slap a "tonight Lisa had a nightmare", the story would actually make sense, but as it is, it is just dark miserable piece of garbage.
Anonymous12 months agoI am gone to try and write a 2nd and 3
part to this i am not good with these thing it will take a while but i will try.
Anonymous10 months agoThis story is so hot. I come back often to reread it. I would love another installment.
