All Comments on 'Lisa's Journey Ch. 02'

Excellent chapter and a nice move towards a darker control. Looking forward to seeing how her control grows and the things that she demands. Rock it on and let us see the submission grow and flourish. Great storytelling. Cheers

Excellent and well written. This story should go much further and deeper. Lisa has much to experience yet.

Zizzling hot. Yes, permanent steel. Please write faster. The thrill will escalate when she goes home and realizes she cannot wait to return and when humiliation intensifies.

Fabulous chapter. I enjoyed hearing about what Lisa was after being controlled by Audrey.

The forced activity for Lisa to recover her panties in the bar was marvellous and so hot.

I’m intrigued to know how Lisa’s “normal life” is going to fit in with her found dominated one by Audrey, and will her husband know what is going on

Love it hope there’s more in the future

Another solid chapter that continues to promise more in the future. Visiting slave room, sharing Lisa with others, tricking and testing her limits. Very much looking forward for what's to come.

Only critique that I've yet to understand is if this is a dom/sub relationship or if it's going to become a deeper 'love' story. The love making after the spanking hints at something deeper.

Regardless looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully it's not another 10 months (had to reread part 1 before jumping into this part)

Great writing, keep it up

Darker and deeper please in the next chapter. Great writing.

You are producing good stories; many thanks. Lisa has a great future.

Wow, I’m switch but definitely wish I was the submissive in this story. Can’t wait for more.

Good story, well thought out and written. Hope you can find the time and inspiration to take it further as Lisa's journey has only begun.

Amazing peace of erotic art is the only way I can discribe your work. Only wish I could write so well and be so Articulate

Such a great story it’s a shame that no new chapters have been added.

Fun story, I'd love to read more!