All Comments on 'Lisa's Milk Problem Ch. 01'

What a very sensuous story the three doctors helped Lisa with her milk engorged breasts and make her a better breastfeeder for her baby. They will become closer friends with her as she starts cooking supper for them in THEIR house as payment for their services,. After putting her daughter to bed, she will resume her treatments with the three doctors.

Among the three doctors, it will be Jason who will be the one chosen by Lisa to take care of her and become a Daddy to Paige. The two doctors will be the best men at their wedding. When Jason and Lisa have a baby, the two doctors will be godfathers to the new baby and Paige as well as other children they might have.

Really good concept, but I struggled with the repetition of entire paragraphs or at least dialogue repeated as narration.

Amazing how polyandry can be so therapeutic

omg, i loved this story so much, it's what every females needs ... 4 men ...i loved the emphasis on the nipples and the slow but steady pumping of those cocks ... I LOVED THIS STORY, it is one of the best, YES, THE BEST stories i've ever read ... very erotic, very sexy, i was aroused throughout the read .. thank you so much... EXCELLENT, excellently written ... and so so wonderful... in it's depiction of nipple play

LOVED this. Enjoyed the detail of the sucking and fucking. Perhaps could've done sith less of the science?

Maybe the suckers could also be fuckers next time?

One of my all time favourites!

It was an interesting choice using present time emphesis, (ie she says, she does) instead of the more common past tense. But it was much less jaring here. Also adding the science jargon I think helpped add authenticity. Plus the build up of how she met these guys was simplistic but believable. Overall I would say it was a little wordy. You probably could have cut several paragraphs of the science talk and no one would have missed it. But overal nice work