by 36FF_Tiki
I received some emails complimenting this story. To everyone that contacted me, I tried to email each of you but they all got returned. Could you please double check the emails you gave me and email me again. I like to return messages when they are about the story.
Tiki
There are some people you just can't resist no matter how messed up the situation or what you mind tells you to do & you captured that (& the moment the brain stops doing the thinking) brilliantly. When Lynsey asks for the extra hundred it says a lot about her, she's cool headed, brazen when needed & knows what she wants. If she set her mind on getting revenge or just getting Kyle i doubt there'd be much he could do to stop her. A pleasure to read
I really enjoyed the back ground and would love it Lyndsey called them back sometime.
I bet you could write something outstanding with almost any suggestion.
This story is well written and probably more close to truth than fantasy. I just personally don't get into to gang rape stories like this. It seemed more humiliating than hot. I felt so sorry for Lyndsey and hated those jocks. So, of course, well written but her small victory at the end was overshadowed by the cruelty.
Keep writing.