All Comments on 'Lit Review'

Hot story, really well done. It looks like there are a few editing issues, which is kind of funny in light of the story’s subject. But the concept is sexy AF and I loved her “punishment”.

Please write a second chapter. I loved this story.

Breathtakingly erotic, now that is the right way to do a sexy Reluctance story!

So damned close to 5 stars. Dammit I was thoroughly enjoying that until ...

"Yes Daddy Alexander."

I can’t help it it’s a massive turn off for me, logically I know the DD:LG kink isn’t incestuous but I just have a knee jerk reaction to it. *sigh*.

I agree with the other commenter on grammar I don’t normally worry about it I have friends who are badly dyslexic so I tend to autocorrect in my head, but this time it made the mistakes pretty ironic.

If this is your first venture into writing, it’s bloody impressive! I’ll be looking out for more, thanks for sharing

Tess (UK)