All Comments on 'Little Black Ball Ch. 03'

He of course killed her and burned the body. Makes about as much sense as this idiotic tale.

You'll notice the double standard- making a lesbian a mindless slave and infecting a cheating wife with a cancer that will kill her unless feed different sperm every few days is hailed. But emasculating, harming, or humiliating a cheating guy is not okay.

It made no sense at any point. Even for fiction it was ludicrous.

Unique and original story line. That in itself is worth 5 stars. The charcters were all very well fleshed out. This story deserves a much better rating. I wonder if it was that the sex was down played, that it is posting now at 3 plus star rating. So many good writing elements are found throughout this 3 part series. I hope the low ratings doesn't discourage this writer from continuing to add additional chapters to a very clever and original story line.

Another good story.

This was pretty cool I like the setup