All Comments on 'Little Black Dress Ch. 01'

Next part please

Superb first part, intriguing characterisation; well writen and oodles of potential.

I look forward greatly to future installments.

Having the girlfriend yell at him and call him and idiot was over the top. Most men at that point would have said ok and turned and walked out the door. Otherwise, it was pretty good so far. Had you merely suggested to both men instead a chance at a threesum with two sexy, beautiful woman... that would have worked far better than both women trying a power play on him.

Awesome cannot wait for next chapters