All Comments on 'Little Debbie the Girl Scout Leader'

It seems to me like your girl scout leader was well prepared for loving a man!

That was a good story and I like the way you described the scenes between the Girl Scout and older man. I wonder if you write a sequel to this story which would be nice.

This story is amazing and screams out for a sequel!

Need to get some of her girl scout friends involved.

Oh Hell no you don't. Leave it just between them two. It is way to good to add anyone to it. You are one Dammmmmm Good FUCKING writer. But please don't add anyone to this one other than the baby.

I do hope that Jason has knocked up his young slut bitch lover...Would like to read about him fucking Debbie while her young tight little belly is swollen with his bastard baby and he squeezes and sucks the milk from her painfully enlarged nipples and distended, bulbous breasts...He should fuck her like his little dog/bitch, with her down on her hands and knees and her bountiful/beautiful breasts swinging like pendulums below her chest as he pounds her ass hole or cunt...

Where to start? Who talks like that? "Girl, I prefer the word 'cock' as name for the dangly appendage between my legs."

In general, I didn't really care for the 'folksy' stereotypical country characterizations - it was too corny. The idea was good. The sex was pretty good, except for some of the over-exaggerated text, such as comparing the woman to a paddle ball in the first sex scene.

In general - 2 stars. Good idea - needs a lot of improvement though, and consider improving the dialogue so more realistic talk, less of the dime-store reader style.