All Comments on 'Little Flippy Skirt'

Very erotic and well written, this story invites the reader to participate in each scene through it's clearly descriptive prose. While not overtly pornographic, it is very politely portrayed in a way that causesthe reader to reflect back to his or her first explorations.

Lovely. Really well written. Actual characterisation. You get a real sense of warm personalities coming through. A very welcome change from most of what's on here.

This is indeed a breath of fresh air... Loved it and hopefully there will be more... Thanks

...and would like to see some more. I like K.T.

Witness Frank Gehry's lovely building in Prague, nicknamed 'Fred and Ginger', where the two parts of the structure entwine and lean. It is one of the most lovely things ever built. Makes me smile.

I really liked this, it was passionate and well written.

But I felt like the characters and locations weren't described well enough. I was often left confused about parts, because I wasn't sure how they were positioned, or what they even looked like.

You have an amazing attention to detail, but I think you should put a little more of it into the character description, and area description as well.

Anyways, keep writing, I really enjoyed this one.

Don't even try to say it.

Thank you.

Thanks very much for writing and sharing this.

Another magnificent story. As a writer I love the ease of this, the relative simplicity and the happy feel, as an artist the scenario fuels my lust and inspires me. Great work.

Your description of the differing sensations of a bra and a breast took me way - way back. Wonderful !

All of your work that I have read has been nothing but great, enjoyable story lines, characters that attract while hold their part well and all the basic writing skills are NEVER taking away from the reader's ability to enjoy your work, flawless!

BRAVO!!

I wish I wrote this one. It has all the elements I adore, and the descriptions of body language and arousal were perfect. Well done.

Thank you. Beautiful, special and real.The pace of it was maintained with a concurrence of language and plot.Looking for more.

What a talented author! The descriptions leapt off the screen and right into my imagination. Thank you for sharing--I look forward to reading more!