by pantywriter
I love the premise of this story. It was rather predictable but still quite fun. I need to meet fun people like this. I look forward to more.
Story was something totally different to normal sissy stories, really good so please write more chapters to this, added as a favourite
THIS WAS THE START OF A WONDERFUL STORY, HOPING THERE ARE MORE CHAPTERS, TO IT...!
The way you built the characters that they were people you would be interested in was a nice beginning. I liked both Larry and Jasmine and loathed Austin. He is a meathead and a douchbag. A couple of typos but nothing really annoying. Looking forward to chapter 2. Thanks for your effort.
a little simplistic but fresh and new.
Thanks for writing and posting here.
kind of dumb dweeb isn't does he not know she is turning him into her sissy and that is her plan all along not peter i don't think her and peter are even going out together he needs some balls and keep the bitch away or next his sister will be there as well