All Comments on 'Little Ones Disgrace Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

You started out really really strong with part one. Part two started to go down hill and 3 was a let down to be honest. You had a strong build up and fizzled out. Otherwise you have a great story.

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