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All Comments on 'Little Ralph's Problems'

by timmyid2

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timmyid2timmyid2almost 2 years agoAuthor

I'd appreciate comments on the aspects that you liked about the story as well as ways to improve in the future.

Tim

sheeversheeveralmost 2 years ago

forgot it was a" humour "story and didn't see the ending Coming .. put a smile on my dial ..

timmyid2timmyid2almost 2 years agoAuthor

I'm glad that you got a smile out of it. That was the intent. :) I'm wondering... Should I have put more humor throughout the beginning and middle of the tale? I'll try that on the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well done.. keep up the good work

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