by gatorman
That was a very hot story. To have sex with a wolf was so hot... Keep up the good work and write more storys that has sex and beasts...
Interesting story, but how can Gramma be only 37 and her granddaughter be 18? Talk about precocious.
He's right, if the grand mother is 37, and was 16 when she had the mother, the mother is only 21. That would mean the mother gave birth to little red at the ripe old age of 3. But it was an excellent story.
Those who brought the discrepancy of the ages to my attention are correct. The "original" story by the Grimm brothers had the girl much younger - around 6 or 7. I knew this wouldn't be acceptable either by the majority of the readers or by the acceptance standards of Literotica, so I changed the girl's age. BUT I neglected to adjust the mother and grandmother's ages as well, therefore the error. I hope it doesn't detract too much from the story. 5s are always welcome.
Hmmmm...
since I myself wrote this story, and another very famous writer modified it a bit (this is what you can read here, after the age was ridicilously changed), I am really really sure that the original age of Little Red Ridinghood is infact 6.
Every attempt of raping my fantasy makes no sense, as you see in the calculations by "indeed" and "math blooper"...
But if one cannot enjoy the fantasy without forcing it into legal age, so it be:))))
i enjoyed how you protected the original story line, and the math discrepancy only interrupted the story for a few moments. i would, however, reccomend that in your next such story (which i hope there will be) you change the sentence structure a little more to fit the english style. it was a little confusing at first. other than that, very well done!
The details and amazing erotic take to Little Red Riding Hood is purely amazing. If it were not for the pathetic and utterly stupid restrictions on the ages among other things, stories here would certainly be more interesting and less demeaned.
This was one of the best red riding hood stories ive ever read (and ive a sort of thing for them >.>)
Bravo mate. Excellent
You know penis's don't actually go into cervix's, right?
And if it somehow did, she'd probably have a heart attack from the sheer pain...
I mean, I know wolves don't talk either...
Love your version of the story. Now you make me wonder the real story of Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, lol. It surely reaks of erotic intentions.
You said the grandmother was 37 and red was 18 and the grandmother had red's mother when she was 16 right? do you realise this must mean reds mother is 21, only three years older than red? Its physically impossible. I know its a fairytale, but maybe try to be a little more realistic. Its best not to mention exact ages at all instead of impossible ones.