All Comments on 'Little Step Daughter Suzi Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not bad... not good... need better breaking points between shower scene and the spanking scene...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Building nicely - but is there a whole section (about 'her untidy room') missing...? It jumps oddly

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Crap. Sort of " I got out of bed at 7 am. Oh tiring day, time for bed"

Don't bother continuing

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not bad, but there is a big jump between the shower scene and the spanking scene

otti1otti1over 2 years ago

Super. Für den Anfang gut. Es fehlt noch Teil 3

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