All Comments on 'Little White Lies Ch. 05'

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lovemesomephillylovemesomephillyover 4 years ago

Hot chapter all around. Jessie fucking someone else was an inevitability, and probably dad was the best candidate. She kept on teasing him and he couldn't hold back. And since it was dad and she's a little slut she didn't deny him haha. Dex will eventually let this slide would be my guess, and may even let it continue. 5 stars

toobytoobyover 4 years ago
"I can't believe all the waitresses are wearing such low-cut clothing,"

Hmmmmm.....I wonder if the restaurant that Dex and Jessie met Vicky and her husband at was the same place as in Lucky Man and My Sister Made Me? Double-Ds perhaps?

victorino1984victorino1984over 4 years ago

Excellent chapter, you are one of the best authors. Vicky deserves his own saga

toobytoobyover 4 years ago

Oh man, what a birthday party! Jess ending up with dad was inevitable, yet what a rush! And Jessie's revelation about BJs, perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
perfect

Just fucking perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nicely Done!

I've been following all of your stories now for a while and have enjoyed them all. This chapter just adds another to the long list of great ones from you. I did notice that towards the start of the chapter you accidently refer to Dexter as Duncan though. Slight mix up on your protagonist. Keep up the good work!

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 1 year ago

I think this is at least the second or maybe the third time I have read this , your writing is superb , I like the way you let each of the characters involved make their own comments on relevant passages it certainly fleshed out the story and keeps each of those characters involved in the plot where appropriate. Excellent story telling, thank you.

NipkorNipkor8 months ago

Absolutely fantastic sexy story . X

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