by Mentalcase
Although I really enjoyed this chapter I would rather see another chapter of Luck Man - it's a very good story.
There's just too many people, just adding more characters doesn't count as plot
I can't keep up with the amount of characters fucking Jesse. There's just too many
What can I say? This story just gets dumber and dumber. So much for no pissy except by Dex! Rules mean nothing to her and Dex is now just a spineless humiliated cuckold in my opinion!
Just been reading ch.15 page 2. Felt I should make the comment it seems as though Donna has a serious drink addiction problem , this is the second day in a row that she has been too drunk to ruck, and furthermore if John is feeding her addiction he can't love her as much as he says he does. Just an observation.
I just love Jessie , spitfire Jessie . Out of control having fun , perfect girl ❤️
Brilliant story too . X