All Comments on 'Little White Lies Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Although I really enjoyed this chapter I would rather see another chapter of Luck Man - it's a very good story.

TypelipsTypelipsalmost 2 years ago

Finally thx for the chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I'm happy for a new chapter. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
too many people

There's just too many people, just adding more characters doesn't count as plot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I can't keep up with the amount of characters fucking Jesse. There's just too many

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What can I say? This story just gets dumber and dumber. So much for no pissy except by Dex! Rules mean nothing to her and Dex is now just a spineless humiliated cuckold in my opinion!

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 1 year ago

Just been reading ch.15 page 2. Felt I should make the comment it seems as though Donna has a serious drink addiction problem , this is the second day in a row that she has been too drunk to ruck, and furthermore if John is feeding her addiction he can't love her as much as he says he does. Just an observation.

NipkorNipkor7 months ago

I just love Jessie , spitfire Jessie . Out of control having fun , perfect girl ❤️

Brilliant story too . X

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