All Comments on 'Living In The Shadows Ch. 02'

Great chapter. Loving it! 5 BIG FAT STARS.

Action, excitement, young love!

5

Great chapter, looking forward to the next. 5 stars

Noice! …very noice! Looking forward to more chapter. Thank-you

I really enjoyed the prequel to this story. I'm feeling this one is more rushed. I know you want to do weekly and I like that, but seems like the romance is going at a fast pace. From Mel seeming a bit shallow thinking Joe is geeky and having no interest to him actually being hot and her falling for him. Sorry I'm ranting, but good story

Love your work. Don’t mean to nitpick, but shawarma is not Indian food; it’s more Middle Eastern. Other than that, I am looking forward to the next instalment.

Thanks,

Mike in Toronto

Damn - eyes watering most of the time I read this chapter. Great job! 5*

Holding my breath.

The lesson is that bitch friends like Keri will eventually get your man

Jim's in a coma and Ken's hamming it up for the cameraman? Seems like an insensitive jerk.