All Comments on 'Living with Elise Ch. 01'

10 years ago??? No comment.,

This was so good!! Finally, good writing about a girlfriend cheating on her boyfriend with his brother!!

Do you just like to torture your readers? If not more chapters would be a good way to make it up to us.

Ready for chapter 2, hope its longer.. Very good start though!

you got a nice set up going. but you need to find a more clever way to end the chapters if they are going to be this short. keep it going i want to see where this will go