All Comments on 'Living with Mom'

by williepeter

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

wth was that???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

When you get out rocky can meet your mom and you can both serve.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Poorly written and very unbelievable. Please make the stories a little more realistic so readers can immerse themselves in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Too weird...

ReaperKingUltraReaperKingUltraover 2 years ago

Too short and wasn't very well written the mom gave in to easily there was little to no resistance your stories could use alot of work try to be more realistic

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Retired engineer, retired on the coast. My writing background has been technical writing. The works of writers like saddletramp1956 and kalimaxos inspired me to give it a try. I enjoy comments from published authors, in most cases the comments are helpful. Anonymous comments...