All Comments on 'Liza Gets Tricked by a Stranger'

You have a good scenario, but the story as written has some holes and is incomplete. It seems rushed.

For example, this is at her husband's golf club for some annual dinner, but there's no mention of the husband during the session or when she's walking home afterwards.

Very raw, very mysterious, very well written and paced. LOVE this series. Fantastic work!

@Lifestyle66 - thank you for your feedback, as a fellow writer I respect your opinion!

Sorry that part of the story wasn't clear that this chapter/meeting was not the Golf dinner. To be fair, I did mention when he demanded her presence at his office that it was 2 days before the dinner, and then when they were speaking, several times that the dinner was 2 days hence from that meeting. She also says that she doesn't know if she can wait 2 days for an encounter. Due to some turmoil in Chris's life, he's not in a position to entertain her sexually, thus he rounds up another buddy to do the deed for this episode. The awards dinner will be the next story I post and hopefully doesn't come across as rushed, although I write as I speak, which is 100 MPH. I'll try to dial it back :D

Thank you for another excellent chapter!

I am enjoying Liza’s torment. She wants to live in the danger zone, yet is uncertain about how much danger she is willing to accept in order to satisfy her carnal desires.

You are skilled at building tension to a climax…and release!

Happy to see that her playtime with Chris is also giving her husband some extra sex.

It worked for me….well done!