All Comments on 'Lock Down Blues Ch. 01'

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thimblethimblethimblethimbleabout 4 years ago
Looking forward for Ch. 02

looking forward for Ch. 02

horne5horne5about 4 years ago
loved it

next soon i hope

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

This story is so good! Please make another us are when you can!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

sweet baby Jesus that hot!! cant wait for part 2

PrinceBambiPrinceBambialmost 4 years ago

Amazing! Hot hot hot! Willing acceptance of the wonders of family sex. Yay! Looking forward to future chapters and the hinted at bisexual family extravaganza.

falcon29falcon29almost 4 years ago
Soapy?

I can tell you from experience that soap of any kind makes a terrible substitute for lubricant. It leaves a penis itchy and irritated for hours, if not for a couple of days.

As for the story, it all seemed a bit 'down and dirty'. I like the concept, but it read as if you were in a hurry to finish it.

olblueyesolblueyesalmost 4 years ago

love the premise,,,,but what is the rush,,conversations are brief and fucking is quickly decided with no hesitation on anyones part,,more like a stroke story..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Small tits are sexy as hell.

DO NOT write small, but nice.. It is small AND nice and sensitive.

A lot of small titted women can cum, just from having attention paid to their small, sexy, and beautiful tits.

2WET2TURN22WET2TURN2over 3 years ago

I would buy the book. Soooo hot!

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Getting along in years now, should be considering retirement, but can't really afford to quit my day job right now. Evenings spent as sound and light tech for rock bands, and lots of writing and some singing. Some years ago life smacked me in the head, and since then I've deci...

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