All Comments on 'Lockdown Ch. 02'

Loved it .

Second time around is just as good love you Jen make your brothers happy they'll love you for ever. Not sure about sis though.

This has to be one of my favorite stories I've read on Literotica. Freakin' excellent job!

It is simply saying one of top stories i read. Cant wait part 3. I hope there will be part 3...

One of the best reads I’ve had in a long time. Would love for this to continue, would like to see the girls beat the guys next time 😜

First way too much detail on the computer game.......................... switch it out with something less involved and geeky. Get to the sex/incest faster. Sex is the key feature of this site. And last, why the abrupt ending. Just starting to get good, then done.

boring and predictable outcome

This is apparently the third time I have read this and my previous comments stand. I just wish Jen could get one over on Katie she's far to smug to be a good girl and deserves a sound spanking.

Not as hot as before but a nice try.

Bill S.

I hope you would continue this! I would love to read about the loser‘s forfeit!

Another unfinished story

The computer game part became too long. However, there are still many possibilities in this story. But I don't understand why it is not continued? It deserves a sequel. This is not closed! There could be even more chapters. Really Really like it, just please continue.