by Taxesdaddy13
Very good writing like the story and how Mom came into the play and the BF setting down the grown rules but you can't be too careful hope things work out. Looking forward to next chapter.
Loving the story! Lets see where your thoughts and fantasies take these folks next.
Keep writing please!
Cheers
SAGE
Would be nice if you could add more chapters to this story. There is sooo much you can add
Scores 5/5