All Comments on 'Lockdown in Texas'

I love the premise of the story and hope you'll continue to write more chapters.

Can't see the romantic element yet but I'm sure it will appear.

I liked this story because you did a nice job of providing good but not over-the-top descriptions of the sex while developing the plot elements--the trip and the incipient relationship with the mother. The sex was enjoyable, especially the anal, and I thought the mother came off as real. I look forward to further chapter(s). I'll be interested in how you deal with inevitable conflict that is likely to emerge at some point.

He needs to fill April's cunt with his cum. A threesome is in order.

Good first story, can’t wait to see how this develops on the next chapters

Great start to a series of events during lockdown.

Mom displaying the finer points of this car while getting fucked spread eagle on hood of the Hemi cuda convertible sounds good.

With your " DADDY " bullshit and how big you are. Big boobs are NOT better than smaller! A friend has F and it shows in her back a lot of pain and to spend a lot of money for specialbra not to speak of limited styles. So drop these parts to mention, you don't have to do numbers to write erotik tales. Sometime it si sexy to discripe the shape of boobs.

Ok let's see in the future.

Keep this going!

Congrats on your first story. I’m not a fan of the “daddy” bit, but was a good start otherwise.

5 stars. Forget about the negative comments they are delusional and spiteful

Oh I hope there is more! I was concerned at seeing only two pages and thought this could go on for many chapters. Lots of threads to explore. Why the "Daddy" fascination, what's the story with Sami's Dad? How soon does this develop into a threesome and the dynamics and John's parents overseas business? All with the tease of the faux pandemic in the background.

I'm gonna sit back and enjoy as you spin chapter after chapter on this one.

BTW if folks don't like your efforts or it disturbs their sensitivities perhaps you should let them skedaddle on down the road a piece. 😉😂

Looking forward to the next installment.

Cheers

SAGE

Great story…..

5/5

Your male characters are entitled assholes with little respect for women!! Misogynistic asshole writer