by Xarth
I am honestly glad it didn't go further with the dad, but Dess deserved to feel up his mother at least once ;P That aside, this was honestly not only super hot but rather wholesome as well. I felt absolutely no negative feelings reading this ^_^
Sultry taboo fun. Very well written. 5 stars. When it’s cold outside, I particularly enjoy a story set in the heat of summer.
Fantastic story. Follows in your pattern. You're a great writer. Love your stories!
Nice story. I especially enjoyed the no size aspect. No 10inch cocks and DD boobs. It was about the emotional connection.
You got dangerously close to the family orgy with this one. I'm glad that you kept it strictly to each couple loving just their own partner WITHOUT any swapping. So many brother/sister incest stories start out really great only to get trashed and ruined by having the parents join in and swapping partners. 😑 I hate that crap!
I'm only giving you a 4/5 though because Dess and Rhae should have developed a stronger emotional bond becoming more than siblings while becoming lovers too. The double love, family love combined with a couple's love is very gratifying in these stories.
But I'm willing to concede that Mom's approval for her children to make love was definitely a point in your favor. I really loved the parting shot that was fired:
Mom-"Morning, kids. Breakfast is almost ready, so don't be too long."
Dess-"Uh, yeah, Mom. I'll, uh, let Rhae know when I see her."
Mom-"Yeah, you do that."
I literally laughed so hard 🤣 that I cried! Perfectly priceless!!!
Very nice. I enjoyed this a lot. I like that all four are interacting and growing increasingly comfortable (joyful) with that. I would love it if there were another chapter or two, to see how the characters grow increasingly playful and maybe even demanding with each other.
It reminds me a little of Misty’s family in your last Futa series.
i didnt like it.. putting the parents into it totally ruined it for me.
I loved the slow burn and the realistic feeling spiral of depravity! Excellent story!
4/5 You always deliver amazing stories. The only reason this isn’t a 5 is just because while it is great, it never really hit that fever pitch for me. Appreciate the family dynamic, and the slow fall from the heavens to the horny.
This story was just fantastic. I thought the pacing was excellent and the dynamic with the parents was sexy and well written! Definitely going in my favorites.
Another gem from a great erotic writer. Love the dialog, which has become your trademark...
Always enjoy your kinky plot lines but the parent spin I just couldn't get on board with. 4*
Ohh holy hell this is Hot, 5 stars worth. Hoping you continue with their story, liked Daddy nails daughter in his work shop, and mom loves sons hard goes long time cock. Well done, and thank you for it.
O Xarth, so many of your stories are so very much the-things-I-like that sometimes it feels like you’re writing them just for me. I know that isn’t the case, but thank you anyhow. Just lovely and horny as hell.
Excellent! I loved the pace and eroticism. I think this deserves a sequel if you're up to it.
so good.
I usually love the dedication to one partner, but damn it is very rare that I'm hoping they switch or share or whatever and this book had me hoping for a foursome!
Good work Xarth. I'm not normally into multiple partners - but this was so well done! 5/5!
Another wonderful write-up from my favorite writer. It's a perfect story, but it needs to be continued. Incredibly erotic, very lifelike. I felt like I was there among the characters. Maximum recognition. :)
This was perfect, an orgasm every other page. I got to enjoy the story for an entire week.
I read this when I was new to Lit a year ago, and still anonymous. I didn't comment then but gave 5*.
I like the freshness of this story and the honesty between the characters. The story is so well written that I was carried along. It deserves more than 5*
Awesome and compelling story! I love the way you develop the sexual story lines. In regards to the lockdowns, I can only hope that it allowed millions more people the opportunities become open to shared nudity and open sexuality. It would have provided a huge increase in the mental health of the human race.