by m_storyman_x
I'm looking forward every day for the next chapter of this story because it's super hot and nice and long which I love. I'm surprised that you didn't include Becky's mom and Billy's mom and sister on your character list. Here's hoping that you explore more of the incest side of this story in chapter three with Becky and her mom and Billy with his sister and his mom. Five stars and a favorite point.
This is just about the perfect mix of things I love about stories in this site. Well written, hot, a little bit ridiculous. Perfect.
Wonderfully silly and wonderfully sexy. 5*
A trivial comment after looking at the cast list. More curiosity than criticism, and certainly not to be taken as political correctness, I'm Canadian American myself, The names are all British (some of them on black people) or Chinese. No Italian sultriness or soft blonde Polish pussy or saris to unwind. Many Literotica authors seem to think everyone who isn't named Leroy is British.
Our hero may have been sexily inexperience at the beginning of the story but I wager he will have had sex with every female mentioned by the end of the story!
5
not really my cup of tea. after a promising start everything goes too quick and too unreasonable. all these horny old women flashing their pussies - one or two would be nice, but in those masses they give me the creeps, like a slutty zombie apocalypse. his sister even doesn't have a name, yet we get to know her grabbing the hero's dick. if the writing and/or the characters were more elaborated, I might have stayed, but I see that there are enough fans of it to leave you alone with them.
More please!! Despite what others think, the opportunity to develop the story further is still there... like his sisters name. LOL...
Can’t wait to see where your locker room are goes. I see a number of exciting chapters coming!
Series is ok, please don't knock off any of your characters in this one please? That is a real mood killer!
This dumbass MC is running off his mouth again.
Mommy flashed Billy. I guess Daddy flashed daughter too (for that dare mention in chapter 1). Maybe they fuck and will fuck at some point.
The characters here sure are weird.