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You SO have to write a second chapter with them and Mark!

You should really work on your spelling and grammar. And don't be in such a rush to submit your stories that you leave so many errors in your in them. That makes me want to stop reading it and rate it TRASH! And try to add a little more variety to your stories.

Need to work on your word tense.