by ronde
Clever, sweet, funny, sexy!
I like the pacing, then direct dialog. I like that everyone is over-the-top happy about sex. If you're going to write, write big! Write about something amazing!
I'm always happy to read your work.
Adventures in space, the next frontier. Seems like a match made in the heavens for the miners and breeders. Whilst it might be fun once I think I'd prefer my sex regular than a one day fuck fest, but quite the idea. An enjoyable read once again 5 stars
Reads like Golden Age SF. - and the golden age of science fiction is twelve. ;^) ;^) ;^)
I'm not a science fiction fan at all - but this story got me right in!
Have read some other stories of yours too & they're great too.
Please keep writing.
Not my usual genre, but I like this one a.lot! It must have been fun just coming up with all those names. It’s masterful.
As always, thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.
Enjoyable, a little over the top but so much fun to read. Xander is a hoot and the trouble she causes.
Who knew? The prime trick of Science fiction and science fantasy is believability. And you smashed it, in spades!
Wry, Funny. Gung Ho! Impossible, but!...A space swordsman with a wonder dick! More of these, please.