by Bizzy_Bish
She could still be pregnant considering it takes two weeks after missing a period to get a positive pregnancy test....
I just hate pregnancy storylines; so predictable and anoying. And am glad she finally got some birth control, after having had sex for weeks seemingly without protection....
Oh, I get it, sex is the story. Logan must be the only person who can smell sex on her. She just got through having heated sex, fogged up the windows and Coach can't smell the sex? uh, huh.
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I saved my comments until I got to this chapter. Lauren is a sensible girl gone stupid for sex. In the first chapter she 'did what she was told.' She's completely loss her will, she's going to ruin herself for sex with a smug, selfish, egotistical prick? Yep, happens to dumb teenagers and women all the time. The story is just ok, it seems to be barely there and only to facilitate the sex. She started having sex with Logan and developed the stupid disease, no protection. Hopefully, you'd give her some pride and some positive direction as the story goes on.
I held my breath and my heart raced until she said NEGATIVE pregnancy test. Even though its still too early to tell, I hope it stays negative.
he is so insecure in what they have that he is not even giving her time to respond before he starts to accuse her, looking for a way out...
"I didn't know who left the note and I really didn't care. All of those spelling and grammatical errors, Bitch, please." I thought the same fucking thing before I read it! MOFO please spare me *laughs* love me some Lauren. Logan totally loves him some Lauren too, if I didn't know it before the eight text messages proved it. Cannot wait for the next chapter, hurry please!
:( U cn not leave me hangin like dat lol pleaz update dis story quickly
ok keep going ths shit iz hot y did u stoppppppppppppp damm just wen it was getting good