All Comments on 'Lola's Lurching Life Ch. 03 - Final'

Loved it, but struggling to accept the ending as final.

Even mispelled Lola

There are too many unresolved plot lines to abandon Lola like this. She deserves some closure, and more than a fair share of happiness.

ADunsmuir - yes you make good points. But the story title indicates her lurching life, and the ending I gave it leaves her story 'up in the air' which is appropriate, I feel. And so...