All Comments on 'Lola's Lurching Life Ch. 03 - Final'

by EgmontGrigor2020

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EgmontGrigor2020EgmontGrigor2020over 3 years agoAuthor

ADunsmuir - yes you make good points. But the story title indicates her lurching life, and the ending I gave it leaves her story 'up in the air' which is appropriate, I feel. And so...

ADunsmuirADunsmuiralmost 4 years ago
Definitely needs a sequel or two.

There are too many unresolved plot lines to abandon Lola like this. She deserves some closure, and more than a fair share of happiness.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
good story, terrible spelling/grammar

Even mispelled Lola

ag2507ag2507almost 4 years ago

Loved it, but struggling to accept the ending as final.

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