by GaryLMMartin
I love this story. The best part is the interaction between the two characters - the most intelligent man in the world and a woman who is so much smarter than him in many ways. He is easily duped and she saves the day. The dialogue is brilliant.
But, you are certainly taking us on a roller coaster ride. Each chapter is like an episode from a 1970's adventure series in which the world is saved, yet again. How many groups are trying to take over the world? How many evil geniuses are out there? I'm waiting for a white Persian cat to make an appearance. The "baddies" don't come across as coherent but, maybe, you have a plan.
I'm trusting that you can bring this all home safely.
Great story and thank you
I loved their interactions, banter and Goldie's surprises for Harry; she is so incredibly spontaneous and vivacious. Can't wait to see him meet Goldie's mom. 5
What no kidnapping. Not using compression guns. Just kidding. Loved the chapter
Wonderful story, 10 stars! Hopefully, with all things the Foundation, and others put her through, she can finally get a permanent name change-MOMMY to her twins!!
Surely the smartest person in the world can think of a way to reverse her condition? 5*