All Comments on 'Long Road to Redemption'

by gaggedKitty23

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

Hello Kitty. Well, I like it; I like it a lot. Your first paragraph of the story reveals how well you can write. Too much sex and not enough 'writing' makes for a dull story, at least for me. I like the atmosphere you have created with the evil Russian Viktor who nevertheless has a touch of humanity still left inside him. The John, Rick, whom Aranya is 'entertaining,' seems to have just a bit of understanding, too. With only a few words, you have drawn your characters well. I eagerly await the next chapter! 5* ~~ JB Edwards

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Captivating

I enjoy reading sex stories for pleasure's sake but this was a novel I would pay for. First time I find myself looking forward to a next chapter on here. Well done.

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Born in Chicago...but now I'm a southern girl. My three favorite things: sex, travel, and cute animals. Oh, and I like reading too ;)