All Comments on 'Long Story Short Pt. 01'

Brilliant and entertaining. Truly, how does a mind controller maintain morality? 5 stars. I almost deducted a star because we don't really know what Jim did to Tara to convince her, though i can imagine.

You think the govt wouldn’t want to know about the power to control people? Have you heard of this group called :: HOMELAND SECURITY? Or the CIA? They would love to get their hands on that. And the sheer chaos politicians woild create? Sweet baby Jesus! It’s bad enough and they dont have MC powered.

Wow what a great premise and the characters are fun too. With an ending like that, hope there's more.

It feels like there's a scene missing where he shows her his powers...

This one is starting really great ! But the way the power is working seems still a bit too unclear.

That was pretty great and I love the irony. I hope you keep this one going.

This is the best series:P

Really dig the narrative voice.

Really like the humorous take in MC in this story.

This is the most brilliant thing I have read in this website. Bravo!