All Comments on 'Long Story Short Pt. 06'

Great story! Seems this is the end, but a spin off with more from his perspective would be fun.

Genuinely made me snort at the end. Good work.

At the first chapter I thought it was very promising. Now? Easily the best MC story in this site.

One thing I obviously don't like about this chapter is that it closes a story so great I wish it'd have lasted for longer still.

By all means feel free to contemplate any spin off perspective ^^

Beside that though I'm a little frustrated by the fact that it's not more crude or less consensual at any given time but I get that it's the point of the wholesome vibe which is successfully managed (and one of your trademark).

Already with Bast I felt the same : funny, wholesome, cool, but I don't know, could the guy really not fuck with them just a little more sometimes ?

What great fun! I loved your storytelling technique, leaving Jim pretty much out of view. Thank you for getting Jin and Tara together again, I was starting to worry about her.

An absolutely fantastic series

I feel it would have been better if they didn’t end up married however