All Comments on 'Longhand'

No - make that excellent! Thank you for this wonderfully steamy story. Five stars and please write us more!

Fine erotic writing. So good that the odd wee glitch can be overlooked.

Really, one of the most wonderful pieces of writing here on Lit. As Scotsman noted, there is the occasional glitch, particularly in terms of switching tenses in a way that doesn't make sense (I'm assuming the author might have begun in one and then decided to switch overall to another and missed a spot or two in the process), but it really doesn't interfere with experiencing this as a truly entrancing piece of erotic writing

It was a very nicely read story. The story was so inviting and easy to read that the few small "glitches" were easily skimmed over and didn't compromise the vibe of the story. Keep it up.

And not wasted time reading this.