All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 11 Ch. 26-30'

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Anonymousabout 3 years ago

I love the continuing adventure

Thanks for another chapter. I love following this story and have enjoyed all of your other stories.

rRC

TGun3112 about 3 years ago

Getting to repetitive

The Road trip is boring, nothing new here or even very interesting.

Life in the Circle is much more interesting, with better characters. All of Daves wives are much more interesting than the ladys he's met on the road.

No drama on the road.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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