All Comments on 'Lord Benfords Gala'

Liked it....Continue please.

bit it lost it with the sex -- it was simply not erotic. And you need an editor; you meant "beck and call", not "beckon call".

Thank you for your not so kind response. The misspelled "bit" for "but", at the beginning of your comment, did bring me a slight chuckle. I do enjoy constructive criticism, and I do stand corrected because of the following website information on 'Common Errors in English'. However, the information from m-w.com was what I used and trusted. If you go to m-w.com (Merriam-Webster) online dictionary you will find the information I used while writing, which I have copied and pasted below.

http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/beckon.html

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(From m-w.com)

Main Entry: beck·on

Pronunciation: 'be-k&n

Function: verb

Inflected Form(s): beck·oned; beck·on·ing

Etymology: Middle English beknen, from Old English bIecnan, from bEacen sign -- more at BEACON

intransitive verb

1 : to summon or signal typically with a wave or nod

2 : to appear inviting : ATTRACT <the frontier beckons>

transitive verb : to beckon to

- beckon noun

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Main Entry: beck

Pronunciation: 'bek

Function: noun

Etymology: Middle English bek, from Old Norse bekkr; akin to Old English bæc brook, Old High German bah, Lithuanian begti to flee -- more at PHOBIA

British : CREEK 2