All Comments on 'Lore of the Angels Ch. 04'

Please write more! The whole series is really good and I can't wait to read more.

This series is one of the best, i can hardly wait for the next chapter post! Keep up the good work!!!

what a gem!

Your story is just awesome. Very refreshing, new and unique from other non human stories.Excellent writing style. Looking forward to more chapters and more stories from you. After reading this site for years, I was compelled to register today to make you my favorite author. Thank you for a well written story. awesome job.

Don't do this to me!

Ok, so I should be revising but PLEASE. This is an amazing story

Love it and am about to become very demanding as I need more now.I am an official addict and need more soon please.

I have been following this series since it appeared on the site. I will be checking every time to see if you post anything new. Hopefully Aria will live. Maybe next time when you write something else it can involve witches, and succubuses and all that stuff. Hope to read more.

Enticing story...rich characters.

Please write more..

P.S: just a side note, in arabic (my native language) when you are addressing a group, it is Kayfa Halukum. Thought you might wanna know since you say you have a passion for languages

Her wings have to be restored. They cannot be separated like this. With that said great story look forward to more.

really great story. do keep writing!

I saw you're going to submit edits but I think this on its own is fantastic! I mean with this kind of story... it's so fresh and the characters are great! You should send it for publishing once you're done. I mean... I tried to imagine what the battle scene would look like but I think if it was a movie it'd be quite epic to watch. Keep writing! More pls!

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a big problem comes now. Yuki will never make anyone as powerful as she is by just saving them. By saving aria she has not only restore her wings but also restores her power as cardinal and makes equal to her and other cardinals. Intresting twist. Can't wait 4 more.

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did I miss this posting? Okay that's all I have to say because chapter 5 has posted too. Oh yeah 5 stars!!!!

Thanks for a wonderful story. Only thing is that sometimes there are bits that are just not right but this edited one is better. Still a couple of times when you change to current tense and that seems strange. But better thank you, keep writing.

xo

The details!!! Ok it's official I LOVE this story so much.

like a good plot twist. For as much as I bitch, I'm still reading ;)

You surprised me. Not only is this one of my favorite types of stories--a couple that starts out hating each other/as enemies--but a plot twist that I didn't see coming. Well if they're to be together, one of them must become like the other, that's obvious, but I wouldn't have guesse she had an innate ability to become an angel already inside her. Keep writing please, this is one of the best stories on this site!!

clipped? unclipped? You seem to be using the verb "unclipped" when you actually mean "clipped". Either that or I'm totally lost.

This story picks up the pace with action or sex. It's getting really boring.